11. Feedback on Rosie Dixon!

Background
'sob story is too 'sobby' Rosie needs to focus on one disaster at a time'
'sob story a bit too overdone'
'sob story believable and appropriate for the X Factor'

Two groups thought Rosie's background was too overdone however that is the sort of thing you find on Talent Shows. Maybe we limit her problems and just exaggerate one (or two.)

Props
'Good link between bracelet and brother'
'Good idea for props'

Detail
'Good detail in hair'
'Good detail'
'Good detailed costume etc. Research becomes more detailed/explained further on'
'Maybe keep level of detail consistent?'
'Could have gone into detail about other artists'

One issue about the level of detail was that our Background/Target Audience/Other Artists sections were less detailed than the other heavily detailed paragraphs. I agree with this as we just found a lot more to say when talking about hair/clothes/music video concept etc.

Music Video Concept

'Good use of sketches'
'Good sketches of music video concept'
'Photos/Images/Drawings really good'
'Love music video storyboard'
'Nice storyboard'

Social Media

'Good use of pictures - taken own photos - good effort'
'Good effort with pictures'
'Social media etc. is so successful'
'Album cover, tour dates and social media is ace'
'Good website idea'
'Good newspaper headlines'

Overall, our mainstream artist idea Rosie Dixon went down really well with the only two issues being that her sob story could be considered too much of a sob story and that we needed a bit more detail in certain places but overall it was really good feedback!